Good information but some mistakes good use of pictures I learnt a lot of information about singing I liked how you add some links of the websites you looked at.
this is amazing seetai I learnt a lot about sing and instruments it was a little bit weird because you put the exact same thing about the bird bones fluits twice
It had interesting facts, for instance I didn't know that you could sing in different ways, like singing with your throat ( which I knew ) but I didn't know that you could sing with your stomach. ( I don't fully know how you do that, and by fully I mean I know absolutely nothing on how to do it.)
It is good you explained what your passion about and it has good info to.
ReplyDeleteGood information but some mistakes good use of pictures I learnt a lot of information about singing I liked how you add some links of the websites you looked at.
ReplyDeleteits is really good but maybe a bit more information would have been good i learnt a lot about singing i really liked it
ReplyDeletethis is amazing seetai I learnt a lot about sing and instruments it was a little bit weird because you put the exact same thing about the bird bones fluits twice
ReplyDeleteIt has got some good information. I liked the pictures.
ReplyDeleteIt has some good information. I liked the pictures.
ReplyDeleteThere was some good Information I learnt quite a lot.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could check the spelling.
It was good how you made everything clear.
It had interesting facts, for instance I didn't know that you could sing in different ways, like singing with your throat ( which I knew ) but I didn't know that you could sing with your stomach. ( I don't fully know how you do that, and by fully I mean I know absolutely nothing on how to do it.)
ReplyDeletereally good info
ReplyDeletetry to make the sentences more clear
I really like what you did with the pictures
really good info
ReplyDeletemake the sentances easyier to understand
liked the pictures
really good info
ReplyDeletemake the sentances easyier to understand
liked the pictures
i love it
ReplyDeletegood info just some mistakes you could work on.
ReplyDeleteAdding words that will make the sentence make scene.
your were clear what you were doing.
i like this it has good information aspeshally about throught singing
ReplyDeleteI liked your slide show but you could try and make the sentences make more sense
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